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Tharlam Gyatso

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Thousand Suns

    As is the case with most poetry from the heart and a dedicated mind, I could only truly critique it should I have even a basic understanding of its underlying ...

    Jun 25, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Not Alone.

    It is a funny old situation I find myself in with your work, Alicia. On the one hand I have the energy to remain your harshest critic until the very ...

    Jun 25, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: In the early hours.

    This certainly is a very graphic, colorful poem. For that I am thankful to have read it. Despite my being in agreement with the above comments concerning the break of ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Insomnia

    I think this is a rather good poem, all in all. At first I was a little turned off by the stark rhyming of the opening stanza, but once it ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: missing you

    There has obviously been a lot of feeling poured into this poem and I admire that very much. From someone whom misses the physical presence of his wife at the ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Child of A War-Torn Country

    This is a very harsh poem and a lot of the time, to me, it sounds like you are shouting. I feel this acts a bit like a double edged ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: what if

    I dare say that this poem had a lovely 'bounce' to it. The rhythm came across like song and I could see myself singing it as I walked through the ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: what are homosexuals for?

    Well, Medusa. It has to be said. That was a wonderful piece. I confess it is not in a style that would normally appeal to me, but this worked. This ...

    Jun 24, 2008


An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming.
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